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Lay a gentle hand on rust Obstinate and stubborn, it fails from the start Vivacious and bubbly you present that hand to the Everlasting pulse of a failed heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/11/2012 2:17:00 PM
Smile ~ Look into my eyes, my dear sweeet beautiful Laura * Deeeper my love * To part your heart, and taste your lips * Breathe you in this breath of light * Look into my eyes, my beautiful love, forever; John!:) ~
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Date: 11/19/2011 9:20:00 PM
Dear Laura, I LOVE YOUR Versatility no matter what Form YOU use YOU Draw the Reader to YOUR Mind and Heart SUPERB, with LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...Harry
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Date: 6/29/2011 11:19:00 PM
YOU'VE GOT IT! another good one
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