Love

A tear has broken my love has woken for our love is still forever broken i will not watch the ocean my tears are forever broken until the day my love has spoken for that will be our token for love is woken but still forever broken the nightwalker

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Elizabeth Bark

Date: 11/21/2010 3:00:00 PM

i might be young...but im not young at heart..love is a strong word for so little letters...very nice way of putting it...with love...lizzy.b

Ana Alicia

Date: 10/17/2010 10:53:00 AM

why not to watch the ocean? and keep on loving it makes things more alive, I still am to be in love so I might better shut up but I have the silly idea that love comes in a whirpool of emotions, unbalancing all and balancing all. but if I could I would never stop looking at the ocean, I haven't seen it in five years and I miss the peace that comes with it. I liked this poem I dislike the feeling I hate that things sometimes are broken, sorry to bother.