Love

Its affection A complete connection What a perfection An art of attraction I need to take action To the reaction A charm Rings an alarm Oh its so warm In pursuit for love I found you Had to stick like glue I love you Forever i shall... Edward

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Beata Agustin

Date: 3/26/2024 5:52:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/7/2016 12:36:00 AM

EDWARD, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 9/12/2015 7:49:00 AM

Edward,, awesome write! I enjoyed reading this poem. Skat

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/5/2010 9:19:00 PM

So very sweet, Edward, and thanks for your nice comment to my poem today. LUv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/5/2010 9:00:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Edward. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/5/2010 3:59:00 AM

Very nicely thoughts on love with rhyming, edward