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Intoxicating Heart warming and beautiful Imperfectly flawed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 7/29/2014 5:48:00 PM
Jade... A nicely done Haiku.... LINDA
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Date: 6/26/2010 2:15:00 AM
" imperfectly flawed". i think you said it all there in those two words.
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Date: 6/25/2010 8:03:00 AM
Love the implication. (hic) Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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Date: 6/23/2010 10:08:00 AM
This is a wonderful piece! Accept my colorful congrats on having this poem featured this week. You are such a nice poet! Please, keep your poetry pens dancing on your poetry pad. I wish you all the best with your writing. Love ~Adeleke~
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Date: 6/21/2010 11:57:00 AM
This is a beautiful Haiku...I especially like the use of a single word for the first line...very beautiful words. Thank you for sharing your gifts:)--TK
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Date: 6/21/2010 8:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jade. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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