Love

love who do you love?Iknow who i love. love, is the true meaningof how you feel about that special someone.My love ,roses are red ,violets are blue and all i need is you.From the oceans to the land.from the bright sunlight to the nighttime with the stars forever and ever I love you more than anything in this whole world.

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Audrey Haick

Date: 2/26/2010 1:20:00 PM

Very nice write, Carey. Welcome to the Soup. Sorry, I didn't get to the chat room. Was away for most of the day. Next time, ok? Peace, Audrey

Jay Loveless

Date: 2/24/2010 11:15:00 AM

i think that this is really cute, but i also think you should take it farther, work with it, you have the tallent, and it could become truly magnificent. also maybe work on form? like everyone has their own form, and there are different standard forms, but sometimes it makes it easier to read. xo Rainbow

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/24/2010 11:05:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry today Carey. Please keep writing and sharing with us here at PoetrySoup. Love, Carol

Joanna Smith

Date: 2/24/2010 11:04:00 AM

great profession of love in this poem i love your writting style and format and i love the imagery in this piece. Jo

Skat A

Date: 2/23/2010 6:28:00 PM

I love your love poem no matter how you put it .Very lovely enjoyed reading ...irma