Love

love who do you love?Iknow who i love. love, is the true meaningof how you feel about that 
special someone.My love ,roses are red ,violets are blue and all i need is you.From the 
oceans to the land.from the bright sunlight to the nighttime with the stars forever and ever I 
love you more than anything in this whole world.

lovei do not know?

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Audrey Haick

February 26, 2010 at 1:20 PM

Very nice write, Carey. Welcome to the Soup. Sorry, I didn't get to the chat room. Was away for most of the day. Next time, ok? Peace, Audrey

Jay Loveless

February 24, 2010 at 11:15 AM

i think that this is really cute, but i also think you should take it farther, work with it, you have the tallent, and it could become truly magnificent. also maybe work on form? like everyone has their own form, and there are different standard forms, but sometimes it makes it easier to read. xo Rainbow