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Love

Every message you send me Every word that you speak Lifts me up high To the steepest of peaks Your eyes keep me busy As I lay down to sleep Cause there the only thing That I seem to dream No matter what they say No matter what they think You’re the only guy That was made for me Our pasts have been ugly Complicated and entwined Ill love you forever Till the end of time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/6/2010 9:53:00 AM
oh my gosh I really like this poem its very powerful good job keep writting
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Date: 1/3/2010 5:36:00 AM
Loved this poem Rachel... i can relate to that and that is why i love it...
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Date: 12/1/2009 11:40:00 AM
Wishing you a week blessed with love and inspiration Rachel. I am thanking you for posting your excellent poetry which I have enjoyed reading today. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/30/2009 6:49:00 PM
Don't give up.Check out the words to a song I posted called the climb.It's good.
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Date: 11/30/2009 3:57:00 PM
This is awesome.quite an improvement.Keep going,I am.I got an honarable mention on my poem The Lost Soul.It was one of the members contests.
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