Love

Every message you send me
Every word that you speak
Lifts me up high
To the steepest of peaks
Your eyes keep me busy
As I lay down to sleep
Cause there the only thing 
That I seem to dream
No matter what they say
No matter what they think
You’re the only guy
That was made for me
Our pasts have been ugly
Complicated and entwined
Ill love you forever 
Till the end of time
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Torbenson Avatar
January 6, 2010 at 9:53 AM
oh my gosh I really like this poem its very powerful good job keep writting
Elmore Avatar
January 3, 2010 at 5:36 AM
Loved this poem Rachel... i can relate to that and that is why i love it...
Brown Avatar
December 1, 2009 at 11:40 AM
Wishing you a week blessed with love and inspiration Rachel. I am thanking you for posting your excellent poetry which I have enjoyed reading today. Love, Carol
Bono Avatar
November 30, 2009 at 6:49 PM
Don't give up.Check out the words to a song I posted called the climb.It's good.
Bono Avatar
November 30, 2009 at 3:57 PM
This is awesome.quite an improvement.Keep going,I am.I got an honarable mention on my poem The Lost Soul.It was one of the members contests.
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