Love

It makes the stomach churn
Twist, turn, pure torture
A foolish fairy-notion
A nightmare come true

It binds you - not free
It blinds you - unable to clearly see...
it's ignorance
Yet to fools that's bliss
Rather to wallow in its lies and broken vows
Than to escape the rubble-the garbage that piles

Such laughable, despicable, pathetic junk
Yet some go to great lengths to keep it
In a dark alley, it steals and shatters the heart
But a realist knows to flee from it

Be lazy and lax on it 
For it won't stick with you
Roll your eyes, snicker, even ignore
Remind me to forget ...
it's intense redness
For in the end the flame turns blue

Experience alters the fantasy
And although heartbreaking, it's true 
It can be soul-saving

Why do we adore with everything within
What seems to send us crashing
Plummeting...
Downward...
In a bewildering abyss?
Love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 9/18/2009 9:30:00 AM
wow gurl this is deep iam love cuz this so how u feelin n i luv that but fool in it i was like mmm but i got u lol buti luved it keep write more like this ur besite lizjw4life lol
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Date: 9/2/2009 11:14:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your splendid poetry today Makayla.Thank you for sharing it here at PoetrySoup, where you have become an asset to the site and to us other poets as well. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/1/2009 7:15:00 PM
so very true. Autumn Page
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Date: 9/1/2009 4:31:00 PM
Nice Write, Loved It, Always Cherica Lynn <3
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