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Love

When you fall in love its meant to be when it happens to you, you will see When i fell in love he was the right choice he could make me smile with just the sound of his voice His cuddles protected me and kept me warm when i was in his arms i could come to no harm He always made me happy and never sad he was always good to me and never bad His gentle touch as soft as a feather i hoped his love for me would last forever His skin to touch as soft as lace i loved to admire his beautiful face My love for him will always be there and he already knows ill always care

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/17/2009 10:12:00 PM
Nice rhyme talk, so rythmic!!! Pom pom, a sea-skinned ballad =D lambs labms! Thanks a lot for sharing, and being so honest and fluid! This poem seems to have your true colors indeed, pink bubbles in the air, sprouting from the back of your head; bye bye thanks=D
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Date: 5/17/2009 9:29:00 PM
Dear Katie, YOU are very well versed in the Rhyme form of POETRY Half of my last comment was erased with this Marvelous Piece of ART Keep on writing hone YOUR Talent YOU are a pleasure to read ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 5/17/2009 7:17:00 PM
Beautiful write here! Best wishes to you and yours! Always jeremia
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Date: 5/17/2009 6:13:00 PM
are you kidding me?? you're poems are just as good as mine, if not even better i dont even think im as good, i just write from my heart and soul but this is a great poem! sincerly, Bruce
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