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Love

beneath a willow
shaded from red scorching sun ~
she will surely come

kiss me tenderly
vow we will be forever ~
to prove sincere love



Alas Sunday is always a busy day.

lovesenryu

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Paghunda Zahid

September 25, 2021 at 10:20 AM

Wow.. Sounds great... Enjoyed reading it... Try to manage some free Sundays though.. Lol

Beryl Edmonds

September 21, 2021 at 5:37 PM

That’s lovely Victor, your love is always with you, in your heart and in your mind… Belle

Robert James Liguori

September 21, 2021 at 2:10 PM

She came to you! Beautiful!

Sandra Adams

September 21, 2021 at 8:25 AM

even in so few words you set the scene perfectly....another lovely write! hugs

Sara Kendrick

September 21, 2021 at 3:02 AM

I enjoyed reading this one. I wonder did the busy Sunday interfere with the promise of a lifetime love? Thank you for dropping by. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

September 20, 2021 at 10:13 AM

Lovely, Victor! Sentimental and romantic!

Unseeking Seeker

September 20, 2021 at 8:55 AM

Beautiful words Victor! But then you are young (at heart) :) My version would go something like this - love desires no proof ~ nor does it cling, yearn or haunt ~ fragrance outpouring ~ (how boring compared to your masterpiece!)