Love

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beneath a willow shaded from red scorching sun ~ she will surely come kiss me tenderly vow we will be forever ~ to prove sincere love Alas Sunday is always a busy day.

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 9/25/2021 10:20:00 AM

Wow.. Sounds great... Enjoyed reading it... Try to manage some free Sundays though.. Lol

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 9/21/2021 5:37:00 PM

That’s lovely Victor, your love is always with you, in your heart and in your mind… Belle

Robert James Liguori

Date: 9/21/2021 2:10:00 PM

She came to you! Beautiful!

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/21/2021 8:25:00 AM

even in so few words you set the scene perfectly....another lovely write! hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/21/2021 3:02:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this one. I wonder did the busy Sunday interfere with the promise of a lifetime love? Thank you for dropping by. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/20/2021 10:13:00 AM

Lovely, Victor! Sentimental and romantic!

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 9/20/2021 8:55:00 AM

Beautiful words Victor! But then you are young (at heart) :) My version would go something like this - love desires no proof ~ nor does it cling, yearn or haunt ~ fragrance outpouring ~ (how boring compared to your masterpiece!)