Love

i wrote ur nam in the sky ..........
   but the wind blew it away
i wrote ur nam in the sand...............
   but the waves washed it away
i wrote ur nam in my heart............
   and forever it will stay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Onalaja Avatar
October 27, 2008 at 6:05 PM
hey, that was a good one, but yoou can also read my poems too. i'm gbenga from Nigeria. nice to meet ya
Matheny Avatar
October 17, 2008 at 7:45 PM
Hi
Matheny Avatar
October 16, 2008 at 5:51 PM
I think we should break up. . .
Matheny Avatar
October 16, 2008 at 2:19 PM
Hey did you read what I wrote you??
Spence Sr Avatar
October 16, 2008 at 5:39 AM
This is an interesting poem. I can see the logic in the write. The piece flows very well. Welcome to Poetry Soup! ~Joseph
Matheny Avatar
October 15, 2008 at 6:19 PM
Hey, About what I said earlier. . I was serious but very harsh. . I'm sorry. . You don't have to change for me at all. . Just promise you will at least try to not talk about "IT" so much please. . Thank You. . . . . I still love you though. . I totally understand if you don't. .
Matheny Avatar
October 15, 2008 at 2:51 PM
Hey I'm lookin for a SERIOUS relationship not for you just to talk about that stuff all the time and wanting to hear me. . . . . . . I'm sorry but if it's goin to be like that then we can break up. . . Okay???
Matheny Avatar
October 15, 2008 at 1:51 PM
*Ideas* I Love You
Matheny Avatar
October 15, 2008 at 1:35 PM
Hi. . .
Matheny Avatar
October 15, 2008 at 12:41 PM
YAY!!!!! You finally wrote me back. . . . . . I. . . . Love. . . . . You. . . . . .
Matheny Avatar
October 15, 2008 at 12:35 PM
Hey bubba wat chu doin?? ;>
Matheny Avatar
October 14, 2008 at 9:22 PM
Hey call me tomorrow at 1:00pm where you live,. . . okay?!?! Goodnight love ya'
Matheny Avatar
October 14, 2008 at 9:08 PM
Hello?? Read my poem I'm being as honest as I can be in this poem as I can
Matheny Avatar
October 14, 2008 at 8:57 PM
And you do realize you won't be able to see me ever right?!?!:(
Matheny Avatar
October 14, 2008 at 8:55 PM
Okay. . . SOOOOO whatcha doin?!?!
Matheny Avatar
October 14, 2008 at 8:52 PM
You don't have to if you don't want too. . .
Matheny Avatar
October 14, 2008 at 8:46 PM
I'm Sorry. . . :((((((((((
Matheny Avatar
October 14, 2008 at 8:41 PM
And I have no contact with tyler anymore. . . I'm ready for a SERIOUS SERIOUS relationship And I understand if you dump me right now but I will be Honest,Trustworthy,Loyal,Respectful And Care for you if you just give me one chance
Matheny Avatar
October 14, 2008 at 8:38 PM
Yeah but he just wanted to me
Matheny Avatar
October 14, 2008 at 8:34 PM
I like SERIOUS relationships so if you don't want that we can break up
Matheny Avatar
October 14, 2008 at 8:31 PM
I don't like that bang me then leave me
Matheny Avatar
October 14, 2008 at 8:30 PM
You're not into that do her then her kinda are you. . And I like SERIOUS relationships
Matheny Avatar
October 14, 2008 at 8:26 PM
Have I ever done it before. . . Technically no
Matheny Avatar
October 14, 2008 at 8:20 PM
Okay then we are gf&bf *Sigh* So wat chu doin cutie?!?! ;)
Matheny Avatar
October 14, 2008 at 8:14 PM
I was goin to say yes but if you don't want to then. . .
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