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i wrote ur nam in the sky .......... but the wind blew it away i wrote ur nam in the sand............... but the waves washed it away i wrote ur nam in my heart............ and forever it will stay

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/27/2008 6:05:00 PM
hey, that was a good one, but yoou can also read my poems too. i'm gbenga from Nigeria. nice to meet ya
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Date: 10/17/2008 7:45:00 PM
Hi
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Date: 10/16/2008 5:51:00 PM
I think we should break up. . .
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Date: 10/16/2008 2:19:00 PM
Hey did you read what I wrote you??
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Date: 10/16/2008 5:39:00 AM
This is an interesting poem. I can see the logic in the write. The piece flows very well. Welcome to Poetry Soup! ~Joseph
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Date: 10/15/2008 6:19:00 PM
Hey, About what I said earlier. . I was serious but very harsh. . I'm sorry. . You don't have to change for me at all. . Just promise you will at least try to not talk about "IT" so much please. . Thank You. . . . . I still love you though. . I totally understand if you don't. .
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Date: 10/15/2008 2:51:00 PM
Hey I'm lookin for a SERIOUS relationship not for you just to talk about that stuff all the time and wanting to hear me. . . . . . . I'm sorry but if it's goin to be like that then we can break up. . . Okay???
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Date: 10/15/2008 1:51:00 PM
*Ideas* I Love You
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Date: 10/15/2008 1:35:00 PM
Hi. . .
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Date: 10/15/2008 12:41:00 PM
YAY!!!!! You finally wrote me back. . . . . . I. . . . Love. . . . . You. . . . . .
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Date: 10/15/2008 12:35:00 PM
Hey bubba wat chu doin?? ;>
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Date: 10/14/2008 9:22:00 PM
Hey call me tomorrow at 1:00pm where you live,. . . okay?!?! Goodnight love ya'
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Date: 10/14/2008 9:08:00 PM
Hello?? Read my poem I'm being as honest as I can be in this poem as I can
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Date: 10/14/2008 8:57:00 PM
And you do realize you won't be able to see me ever right?!?!:(
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Date: 10/14/2008 8:55:00 PM
Okay. . . SOOOOO whatcha doin?!?!
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Date: 10/14/2008 8:52:00 PM
You don't have to if you don't want too. . .
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Date: 10/14/2008 8:46:00 PM
I'm Sorry. . . :((((((((((
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Date: 10/14/2008 8:41:00 PM
And I have no contact with tyler anymore. . . I'm ready for a SERIOUS SERIOUS relationship And I understand if you dump me right now but I will be Honest,Trustworthy,Loyal,Respectful And Care for you if you just give me one chance
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Date: 10/14/2008 8:38:00 PM
Yeah but he just wanted to me
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Date: 10/14/2008 8:34:00 PM
I like SERIOUS relationships so if you don't want that we can break up
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Date: 10/14/2008 8:31:00 PM
I don't like that bang me then leave me
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Date: 10/14/2008 8:30:00 PM
You're not into that do her then her kinda are you. . And I like SERIOUS relationships
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Date: 10/14/2008 8:26:00 PM
Have I ever done it before. . . Technically no
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Date: 10/14/2008 8:20:00 PM
Okay then we are gf&bf *Sigh* So wat chu doin cutie?!?! ;)
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Date: 10/14/2008 8:14:00 PM
I was goin to say yes but if you don't want to then. . .
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