Mystic Rose Rose Poet Rhyme

Love

You are precious and transient  
like an ocean, liquid and deep
viewed from an angle changeant    
still, you only favor for keep  

Love, you are my morning delight 
without you I could never smite   
the cumbrance of a darkly night;  
Deprived of you I'd lose all might. 



8x8 Poetry Contest 
Sponsor: PS Awtry 
Nov 8, 2018

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Susan Ashley November 8, 2018 at 8:28 PM A beautiful expression of an all encompassing love, Pixie. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan

Heidi Sands November 8, 2018 at 8:35 AM Beautifully written :)

Charles Messina November 8, 2018 at 6:51 AM A beautiful poem of love, Dixie. Nicely done! Best of luck in the contest with this wonderful poem...Charlie

Vijay Pandit November 8, 2018 at 5:50 AM So many beautiful attributes of love..in longing words..wonderfully expressed Pixie..best for a win.