Love

Love is colourful like rainbows adorning the sky It tastes like a sweet dream in a starry night It smells like an exotic scent and an ardent sigh It looks like Juliette gaping passionately at Romeo’s eyes It sounds like birds’ twittering in ecstasy soaring high It feels like being with one’s love in gained paradise. Ocotober 23rd, 2012 (Emotion Poem)

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Susan Ashley

Date: 6/6/2018 9:47:00 PM

My dear friend, Besma, your expressions of love, in all its sensory glory, is blissful in imagery and beautiful in its multifaceted allure. Only a lovely soul who loves with her whole being could create such visions of nectarous, fragrant, singing and tingling sensations of deep and rapturous emotions. Enchanting and ecstatic poetry Besma! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/7/2018 3:56:00 PM

Only a heart of a refined poetess can feel all the facets of love! Only a soul dripping with fine sensitivity and grace can rejoice the beauty of words! Only a generous and talented pen could compose an elating and uplifting comment! Dear Susan, you are outshining and amazing with genuine heartfelt words. Bunches of love and thanks dear. Shine always and stay safe.

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 5/7/2018 1:46:00 AM

Ahh a lovely poem on the topic of love, the way you have explained it, it sure look like a really nice thing, good luck

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/7/2018 3:10:00 AM

I'm glad you liked and enjoyed my write. So much humbled! Thank you so much for your lovely comment Faraz. Stay bright and blessed.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/6/2018 12:57:00 PM

In Greek mythology we have Zeus transforming himself to Eros for to enable himself to unite the opposites so as to create the world! Love therefore is the unifying force in the universe and in the human soul! Your poem is a fine example of projecting love in all expressions of reality and it is done in a very aesthetic way dear, Besma!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/6/2018 1:43:00 PM

Deeply humbled and honoured by your gracious visit and generous and enlightening comment. Thank you so much for adding value to my write. My pleasure! Best regards, stay blessed.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/4/2018 11:38:00 AM

Intoxicating facets of love, Besma. It appeals to the heart and all the senses! Regards & Blessings // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/4/2018 12:44:00 PM

Your praising comment appeals to my humble soul. Bunches of thanks Paul. Stay bright and safe.

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/4/2018 1:00:00 AM

Lovely poem, Besma.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/4/2018 3:33:00 AM

My pleasure dear Line, bunches of thanks.