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Louise- a Community Effort-Please Add To!

"Louise- swinin' in he trees hardly aware of the summer breeze Louise- be careful what you show- I didn't have to know my dear Louise- that you wear BVD's Louise- did I hear you sneeze? has such great exertion brought you to your knees? Louise- dear, tell me if you please- why you feel you must- be such a darn ol' tease? Louise- "here's an'udder... one of deez..(Brooklyn talk) my lovely girl Louise again you're on your knees this time intent to please Louise- my dearest, dearest friend- I'm so heart-broken to have to tell you- my sweet lovely Louise that we have discovered you're infested with lots of fleas Louise- watch out in the trees! that pine-cone that you thought it was.. turns out a hive of bees! Louise- my special one, my friend... I'll bet you are unique in all the 7 seas Louise- you gotta come down now- a letter you have received seems the "Louise Rhyming Club" has not received their fees... Louise- come on now! you listen with great ease.. but do little but say "oh, my, oh my, oh Jeeze...." Louise-dear girl it's time to eat- so get down from the trees- we have your favorite cheeze! Louise- come down, right now, this instant! for our door got locked somehow and I can't get in without you- because my dear Louise- you are the only one... who has the Louise keys.... so get started folks! let's make this the first whole community project!! regards, and Smile! God dang it!!

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