Louise- a Community Effort-Please Add To!
"Louise-
swinin' in he trees
hardly aware
of the summer breeze
Louise-
be careful what you show-
I didn't have to know
my dear Louise-
that you wear BVD's
Louise-
did I hear you sneeze?
has such great exertion
brought you
to your knees?
Louise-
dear, tell me if you please-
why you feel you must-
be such a darn ol' tease?
Louise-
"here's an'udder...
one of deez..(Brooklyn talk)
my lovely girl Louise
again you're on your knees
this time intent to please
Louise-
my dearest, dearest friend-
I'm so heart-broken
to have to tell you-
my sweet lovely Louise
that we have discovered
you're infested with lots of fleas
Louise-
watch out in the trees!
that pine-cone
that you thought it was..
turns out a hive of bees!
Louise-
my special one, my friend...
I'll bet you are unique
in all the 7 seas
Louise-
you gotta come down now-
a letter you have received
seems the "Louise Rhyming Club"
has not received their fees...
Louise-
come on now!
you listen with great ease..
but do little but say
"oh, my, oh my, oh Jeeze...."
Louise-dear girl it's time to eat-
so get down from the trees-
we have your favorite cheeze!
Louise-
come down, right now, this instant!
for our door got locked somehow
and I can't get in without you-
because my dear Louise-
you are the only one...
who has the Louise keys....
so get started folks! let's make this the first whole community project!!
regards, and Smile! God dang it!!
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