Louder

Let me hear your words,
And 
Let them fill me like written secrets in a book.
So natives of this earth will look,
At me and see your visions of a better world.

Let me hear your words of peace,
A little bit louder.
So your voices can be my voice,
Like sounds of water flowing out of a caves’ lips.

Let me hear your words,
Get louder and louder,
And louder, so they can drown out this world’s transgressions.
Let your wishes slip out this magicians,
Wand and transform this world into an Eden.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dorelien Avatar
January 13, 2010 at 5:54 PM
Thank you Deborah
Guzzi Avatar
January 13, 2010 at 1:48 PM
"Like sounds of water flowing out of a caves’ lips" wonderful line! Light & Love
Dorelien Avatar
January 13, 2010 at 12:23 PM
Thank you Carol
Brown Avatar
January 13, 2010 at 4:57 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Guy-Adler. Please continue to share your writing with us. I wish you the best with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
Dorelien Avatar
January 13, 2010 at 2:21 AM
thank you very much marty
Owens Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 6:03 PM
Very nice poem...enjoyed...Marty
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