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Aug. 26, 2024

Onomatopoeia contest

Sponsor: Emile Pinet

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In the silence of the night, there comes a slam, A door swings wide, a sudden splash of rain, The thunder echoes with a mighty bam, While rivers babble tales of joy and pain. The birds awake and start to warble tunes, As streams begin to gurgle in their flow, The wind begins to softly mumble runes, And trees release a gentle, leafy belch below. A distant clang rings out, the night alive, As branches crackle underfoot, they thrive.

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Date: 10/1/2024 8:40:00 AM
Congratulations Jay! Your Onomatopoeia poem "Loud words" has earned you a distinguished placement in my poetry contest. I was strict, but your poem earned you a spot on the winner’s list. Very well done, my friend.
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Date: 8/27/2024 7:25:00 AM
Hello Jay, I love the word pictures and the word sounds in this well inked poem. I could almost sense each part. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 8/26/2024 4:36:00 PM
I like how this poem rhymes and paints a colorful picture. It is uplifting.
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Date: 8/26/2024 3:05:00 PM
Every word is well placed, gl in the contest dear Jay,
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Date: 8/26/2024 12:01:00 PM
You did this very well..
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