'loud Sigh of Nothing'

your lexis drifted almost like the wind blew them loud sigh of nothing 270720111620

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/15/2011 11:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Chris' contest Wilma. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/15/2011 11:31:00 AM

Congratulations x

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/12/2011 10:36:00 PM

Your description of emptiness is wonderful. I'm impressed!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/30/2011 1:22:00 PM

well this sure made me sigh as well! SIGHHhhhhhh- yup Haaaayyy (heehee usually that's how we "word" out a sigh in my language-- pronounced like Hi but with a sadder intonation of course, not a perky one! haha) I really liked that 2nd line... mwahugs

Kabuteng P.Ink K.
Date: 7/30/2011 1:26:00 PM

oops I was exaggerating of course-- it more like "hay" not with eth onlsaught of a's & y's heeheee-- like "hay buhay"-- that rhymes too-- buhay is life btw :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/28/2011 9:06:00 PM

Enjoyed the senryu, Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/28/2011 1:37:00 PM

Magnificent senryu, Wilma. Very thought-provoking as well. Love, Carolyn

James Peranteau

Date: 7/28/2011 11:15:00 AM

Oh yesss, what a Senryu dear poet ! Just dramatic ! Loved this one ! To mine favz if'n ya don't mind ! Have a wonderful week Wilma ! Much love, james

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/28/2011 10:32:00 AM

Enjoyed this one..Got a chuckle..Reminded me of some people who blow a lot of hot air..Great Senryu...Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara