Alex S Poet I do not know?

Loud Dreams, Silent Screams

This girl, the girl of my dreams.
The causer of my soul’s silent screams.
Bringing my heart and brain to nothing but 
a jumble.
Thoughts, emotions, memories, all having 
one giant rumble.
Feelings I need to express with more than 
just a mumble

I’ll scream, I’ll shout
You’re all I want to think about.
A smile that takes me to paradise
Immeasurable time lost in those stunning 
blue eyes
True beauty unmatched even by the 
infinite skies
The type of girl I could talk to until sunrise
You’re the perfect girl for me, inside and 
out.

Enthralled by your incomparable bliss
Captivated from the very first glance
Emotions I could never dismiss
I should’ve made you mine, when I had the 
chance

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Alex S December 13, 2013 at 6:29 PM Thanks for the comments everyone. Any tips on what I could work on for my next one? I really would not mind some constructive criticism on any of my poems.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 13, 2013 at 4:46 AM Hi Alex, congratulations on your win xx

Dr.Ram Mehta December 13, 2013 at 4:23 AM Enjoyed the poem and congrats, Alex

Judy Konos December 12, 2013 at 12:36 PM All the poetry submitted was heartfelt. From love throughout life to love in the depths of death with reflections of nature. You are all deserving First Place Winners and I thank you for entering your favorites in my contest.