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Lou the Pooh

Once upon a time, in a garden where butterflies dwell there was a caterpillar named Lou The other caterpillars would tease him every day Because, er, Lou looked like, bird pooh! All of them called him Lou the pooh And this would make him mad He had many a fight on the milkweed plant Lou was just so sad Like the others Lou had a huge appetite He was an eating machine In a couple weeks Lou was bigger than he'd ever been Then one day Lou lost his appetite He crept to the underside of a leaf And their he clung, until the time was right Lou had become a chrysalis And would soon become a butterfly Then one sunny morning Lou broke free from his cocoon, and he was a beauty His wings were lavender, with dots of red Lou took off into the air, with his wings spread He floated with elegant ease on a gentle spring breeze He was so happy as he visited each flower And in the garden he spent many happy hours. ...... 2/11/17

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Date: 3/13/2017 7:10:00 PM
Congratulation on your win, Joseph , I want to thank you for entering my contest. I love this very imaginative write of the caterpillar ... Hugs Eve
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Joseph May
Date: 3/13/2017 10:35:00 PM
Thank you for my placement Eve..
Date: 2/12/2017 6:30:00 PM
oh this is GREAT . Is it the fairy tale for children?
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Joseph May
Date: 2/12/2017 7:43:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, I am thinking about entering it in that contest, hope it's up to par.
Date: 2/12/2017 5:46:00 AM
The most fascinating story of metamorphosis told so beautifully here, Joseph:) great:)
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Joseph May
Date: 2/12/2017 6:55:00 AM
Thank you Jo
Date: 2/12/2017 1:56:00 AM
Love this one Joseph. It would be a great story poem for a children's book. The butterfly is my chosen symbol because they are symbolic of metamorphosis and God isn't through changing me yet. Great stuff and a fave for me. God Bless and Happy Valentine's Day. JB A 7 from me.
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Joseph May
Date: 2/12/2017 6:55:00 AM
Thank you for making it a fave Judy... God Bless and Happy Valentine's day to you too...
Date: 2/11/2017 2:29:00 PM
lovely nature poem with a touch of pooh Jospeh... I couldn't have done better myself :-):-) hugs Jan xx
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Joseph May
Date: 2/11/2017 9:08:00 PM
Thanks Jan, Would you haven given Lou a happy ending...or a splat?

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