Lou the Pooh

Once upon a time, in a garden where butterflies dwell
     there was a caterpillar named Lou
  The other caterpillars would tease him every day
     Because, er,  Lou looked like, bird pooh!
  All of them called him Lou the pooh
    And this would make him mad
 He had many a fight on the milkweed plant
       Lou was just so sad
 Like the others Lou had a huge appetite
    He was an eating machine
 In a couple weeks Lou was bigger than he'd ever been
   Then one day Lou lost his appetite
  He crept to the underside of a leaf
    And their he clung, until the time was right
  Lou had become a chrysalis
    And would soon become a butterfly
  Then one sunny morning Lou broke free
      from his cocoon, and he was a beauty
  His wings were lavender, with dots of red
      Lou took off into the air, with his wings spread
  He floated with elegant ease on a gentle spring breeze
   He was so happy  as he visited each flower
 And in the garden he spent many happy hours.
                             ......
    2/11/17
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Roper Avatar
March 13, 2017 at 7:10 PM
Congratulation on your win, Joseph , I want to thank you for entering my contest. I love this very imaginative write of the caterpillar ... Hugs Eve
May Avatar
March 13, 2017 at 10:35 PM
Thank you for my placement Eve..
Dietrich Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 6:30 PM
oh this is GREAT . Is it the fairy tale for children?
May Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 7:43 PM
Thanks Andrea, I am thinking about entering it in that contest, hope it's up to par.
Daniel Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 5:46 AM
The most fascinating story of metamorphosis told so beautifully here, Joseph:) great:)
May Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 6:55 AM
Thank you Jo
Ball Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 1:56 AM
Love this one Joseph. It would be a great story poem for a children's book. The butterfly is my chosen symbol because they are symbolic of metamorphosis and God isn't through changing me yet. Great stuff and a fave for me. God Bless and Happy Valentine's Day. JB A 7 from me.
May Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 6:55 AM
Thank you for making it a fave Judy... God Bless and Happy Valentine's day to you too...
Allison Avatar
February 11, 2017 at 2:29 PM
lovely nature poem with a touch of pooh Jospeh... I couldn't have done better myself :-):-) hugs Jan xx
May Avatar
February 11, 2017 at 9:08 PM
Thanks Jan, Would you haven given Lou a happy ending...or a splat?
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