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Lou

I know you left us/ way before your time And still it's hard for us to see exactly why The pain you suffered/ kept hidden within No way to tell us, nowhere to begin Yet you lived on for 35 years Until finally you couldn't suffer through anymore tears I know you loved us all/ but I wish I could've done more To help you cope with the burden you tried so hard to ignore But your spirit lives on/ in a place like no other And one day I know I'll see you my brother But until then/ know how much we cared for you Rest in Peace my friend/ My buddy Lou

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/17/2011 9:51:00 PM
I rate this a 7 and added it to my favorites. Very nice. ~JSLambert
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Date: 4/17/2011 9:50:00 PM
This is one of the better poems I've read on here. I'm not just talking man. This is real good. ~JSLambert
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