Lotus Bloom

lotus bloom
corsage in moonlight
~ prom night jitters



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on March 16, 2021 for contest ALL YOURS (MAR 17) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST
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Merryman Avatar
March 18, 2021 at 4:19 PM
A lovely haiku, Line! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Gauthier Avatar
March 18, 2021 at 7:22 PM
Thank you so much, Kim ~
Carber Avatar
March 18, 2021 at 7:28 AM
I like the unexpected contrast--the sign of a good haiku! Congrats Line on your win
Gauthier Avatar
March 18, 2021 at 7:22 PM
Thank you so much, LJ ~
Mitra Avatar
March 17, 2021 at 9:45 PM
Wow...short and sweet...Congrats on your win Line :)
Gauthier Avatar
March 18, 2021 at 7:23 PM
Thanks, Carol ~
Allison Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 6:17 PM
love that final line!, a well penned haiku Line:-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
June 26, 2020 at 12:26 AM
Thanks, Jan. Much appreciated.
Mcguire Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 10:19 PM
So fun! A great memory for me. Great twist!
Gauthier Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 10:39 PM
Thanks, Timothy.
Bangalee Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 6:04 AM
fantastic ..........
Gauthier Avatar
June 22, 2020 at 10:22 AM
Thank you, Mahtab. Much appreciated.
Wolf Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 10:58 PM
Ah! The unexpected last line! Terrific, Line!... Will Prom make a comeback next year, I wonder... At least flowers are safe!! TGFT (Thank God for That!). Light and Joy, Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 11:15 PM
Much appreciated, Gershon.
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