Lotus

lotus bloom opens graciously looking skyward a symbol of Zen by Zyrool

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 8/16/2024 9:44:00 AM

I like how Asian Zen was woven into this haiku.

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 8/16/2024 1:37:00 PM

Thank you for that, my friend. I thought it sounded right. Enjoy your day and have a wonderful weekend.

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 8/14/2024 6:13:00 PM

A creative haiku Zyrool. Have a glorious day, my friend.

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 8/15/2024 4:00:00 AM

Hi Jerry, Good day to you my friend. Thank you so much for dropping by and your kind words. Stay Blessed.

Tom Woody

Date: 8/14/2024 3:06:00 PM

I don't see zen, just a beautiful creation from a benevolent Creator. Nice haiku zy

Zyrool Gifford
Date: 8/14/2024 3:25:00 PM

Good Afternoon, Tom. I used zen to mean peace, and I totally agree with you about it being a beautiful creation from our creator. Thank you so much for reading, my friend. Have a great rest of your day.