Lotus

Legs in mud; head floats;
Oriented toward Light;
Throbbing with delight;
Undaunted by floods and droughts;
Symbol of enlightenment.


18 May 2021
TANKACROSTIC Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich
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Merryman Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 2:06 PM
A delightful and creative write, Christuraj! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Alex Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 9:56 PM
Thank you very much.
Mitra Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 10:47 PM
Yes the Lotus is all the above....Congrats on your win Christuraj :)
Alex Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 9:56 PM
Thank you very much.
Y. Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 1:32 PM
Hi Christuraj, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Alex Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 2:30 PM
Thank you very much.
Dietrich Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 12:07 PM
I love the personification of lotus using legs for the bottom of it and having it throbbing. That was very creative work. Congrats on your win!
Alex Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 2:29 PM
Thank you very much.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 5:52 PM
Well done!
Alex Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 11:07 PM
Thank you very much.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 12:48 PM
Hello Christural, enjoyed this beautiful poem. God Bless.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 10:36 AM
Hello Christural, you are welcome my friend. Enjoy your day.
Alex Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 2:38 PM
Thank you very much.
Jayasankar Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 11:26 AM
Beautifully penned acrostic Christuraj... God bless... ~ Ani
Alex Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 12:47 PM
Thank you very much.
Mcintosh Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 5:58 AM
Lovely writing. God bless you always. Love, Gina
Alex Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 7:15 AM
Thank you very much.
Neumann Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 1:44 AM
Brilliant. Kind wishes, Kai
Alex Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 2:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Buehler Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 2:45 PM
A jewel of delight! Best wishes for the contest. :D
Alex Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 10:40 PM
Thank you very much.
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