Lotus

Legs in mud; head floats; Oriented toward Light; Throbbing with delight; Undaunted by floods and droughts; Symbol of enlightenment. 18 May 2021 TANKACROSTIC Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich

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Kim Merryman

Date: 6/8/2021 2:06:00 PM

A delightful and creative write, Christuraj! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/22/2021 9:56:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Carol Mitra

Date: 6/6/2021 10:47:00 PM

Yes the Lotus is all the above....Congrats on your win Christuraj :)

Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/22/2021 9:56:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/6/2021 1:32:00 PM

Hi Christuraj, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/6/2021 2:30:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/6/2021 12:07:00 PM

I love the personification of lotus using legs for the bottom of it and having it throbbing. That was very creative work. Congrats on your win!

Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/6/2021 2:29:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/20/2021 5:52:00 PM

Well done!

Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/20/2021 11:07:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/19/2021 12:48:00 PM

Hello Christural, enjoyed this beautiful poem. God Bless.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/20/2021 10:36:00 AM

Hello Christural, you are welcome my friend. Enjoy your day.

Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/19/2021 2:38:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 5/19/2021 11:26:00 AM

Beautifully penned acrostic Christuraj... God bless... ~ Ani

Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/19/2021 12:47:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/19/2021 5:58:00 AM

Lovely writing. God bless you always. Love, Gina

Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/19/2021 7:15:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 5/19/2021 1:44:00 AM

Brilliant. Kind wishes, Kai

Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/19/2021 2:00:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/18/2021 2:45:00 PM

A jewel of delight! Best wishes for the contest. :D

Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/18/2021 10:40:00 PM

Thank you very much.