Brian Davey Poet Acrostic

Lost World

Lost World


             Wayward ships lost in stormy seas
              Oceans of emptiness begging please
              Ripples of tides in various degrees
              Liquid cooled blue Icelandic freeze
              Desperate land watered down trees

               Capsized cruise on a beach unknown
               Reality sets in now left all alone
               Unseen distances of sand and stone
               Island so empty with green overtones
               Skeleton ship full of broken bones
               Embracing life a castaways new home


        Written for contest: World Cruise (Acrostic) 10/04/17
                  WON 3rd PLACE IN CONTEST RESULTS

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Richard Lamoureux October 24, 2017 at 6:41 PM nice twist on the theme. Congrats on win. Brian Davey October 25, 2017 at 4:26 PM Dare to be different right, thank you so much

Gary Smith October 22, 2017 at 3:19 PM Great flow to this Brian, congrats :) Brian Davey October 25, 2017 at 4:25 PM Thanks again Gary

Gregory Richard Barden October 17, 2017 at 10:05 PM Very cool, Brian - I enjoyed this thoroughly! Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend - keep up the great writing! :-) Brian Davey October 18, 2017 at 3:33 PM Thank you so much Gregory

Janice Canerdy October 16, 2017 at 10:15 PM Impressive treatment on the prompt in a well-written piece. Congrats, Brian! Janice Brian Davey October 17, 2017 at 1:09 AM Thank you so much I am glad everyone seemed to have enjoyed it

Eve Roper October 16, 2017 at 4:49 PM Wow, not only acrostic form but double monorhyme Brian, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve ~`* Brian Davey October 16, 2017 at 7:32 PM Thank you so much I honestly didn't thinknow that I was going to do so well in this contest so I am ecstatic to have placed so well

Ralph Sergi October 5, 2017 at 5:09 PM You have certainly evoked a cold and eerie poetic scenic of a lost ship. my compliments, Brian! Brian Davey October 5, 2017 at 6:27 PM Thank you very much I am hoping that it is a different take on the theme than other poets may write