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Lost World

Lost World


             Wayward ships lost in stormy seas
              Oceans of emptiness begging please
              Ripples of tides in various degrees
              Liquid cooled blue Icelandic freeze
              Desperate land watered down trees

               Capsized cruise on a beach unknown
               Reality sets in now left all alone
               Unseen distances of sand and stone
               Island so empty with green overtones
               Skeleton ship full of broken bones
               Embracing life a castaways new home


        Written for contest: World Cruise (Acrostic) 10/04/17
                  WON 3rd PLACE IN CONTEST RESULTS

Copyright © Brian Davey | Year Posted 2017

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Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/24/2017 6:41:00 PM nice twist on the theme. Congrats on win. Login to Reply Brian Davey Date: 10/25/2017 4:26:00 PM Dare to be different right, thank you so much

Gary Smith Date: 10/22/2017 3:19:00 PM Great flow to this Brian, congrats :) Login to Reply Brian Davey Date: 10/25/2017 4:25:00 PM Thanks again Gary

Gregory Richard Barden Date: 10/17/2017 10:05:00 PM Very cool, Brian - I enjoyed this thoroughly! Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend - keep up the great writing! :-) Login to Reply Brian Davey Date: 10/18/2017 3:33:00 PM Thank you so much Gregory

Janice Canerdy Date: 10/16/2017 10:15:00 PM Impressive treatment on the prompt in a well-written piece. Congrats, Brian! Janice Login to Reply Brian Davey Date: 10/17/2017 1:09:00 AM Thank you so much I am glad everyone seemed to have enjoyed it

Eve Roper Date: 10/16/2017 4:49:00 PM Wow, not only acrostic form but double monorhyme Brian, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve ~`* Login to Reply Brian Davey Date: 10/16/2017 7:32:00 PM Thank you so much I honestly didn't thinknow that I was going to do so well in this contest so I am ecstatic to have placed so well

Ralph Sergi Date: 10/5/2017 5:09:00 PM You have certainly evoked a cold and eerie poetic scenic of a lost ship. my compliments, Brian! Login to Reply Brian Davey Date: 10/5/2017 6:27:00 PM Thank you very much I am hoping that it is a different take on the theme than other poets may write