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Lost Thoughts

What made them think it was wrong... For typed lines left unfinished Are lost thoughts untold... No love letters, no poems, not a song One day the rusted keys fell cold

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Fj Thomas

Date: 1/5/2023 10:35:00 AM

I wouldn't mind a little WD40 over this way, the rust is a bit deep. Really liked this Kelly!

Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/24/2023 6:17:00 PM

Thank you, FJ... I am pleased that you enjoyed it... And, I'm sure that rust will wear away quickly... It's just like riding a bike :)

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/1/2022 6:26:00 PM

So you already know what it means to go dry.

Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/27/2022 10:31:00 AM

Yes indeed... and sometimes I wonder if one day I will just run out of things to say... and leave the pen lay...

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/20/2022 1:15:00 AM

Cold and rusted, mystery encrusted? I wonder how many; words are twin? To ones like these' (you've written in?) Indeed what thought is shadow caught? Re-living of others essence untaught.'

Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/8/2022 9:46:00 AM

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment so kindly on this poem... I do appreciate it, Joe...

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/18/2022 7:37:00 AM

Well written. I agree, this is thought provoking. Powerful :)

Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/4/2022 10:42:00 AM

Thank you Heidi :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/17/2022 12:07:00 PM

Whoa!! The rusted keys fell cold. My mother and father used to say I would rather wear out from working than from sitting around and rusting out. This reminded me of them. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/4/2022 10:23:00 AM

You're welcome, Sara... Thanks for reading. I do appreciate it... Glad that this poem brought about some good memories for you :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/12/2022 8:38:00 PM

Wow, a poem that sure make one think, Kelly, those thoughts locked away. Harry.

Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/2/2022 10:20:00 AM

Thanks for reading Harry... I do appreciate it...