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Lost Sunsets

Lost
colors
of a vague 
sunset, unfolds
stars that paint sanguine
dreamscapes from pale 
plum verses 
of blurred
past

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Matt Caliri

Date: 3/31/2024 5:22:00 PM

Saw this on selected poems. I love how rich and vivid the wordage is while sustaining through the end, every word carefully chosen for this delicate little ornament of a poem. A delightful read, like a tiny delicious appetizer.

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/8/2023 6:20:00 PM

Dear Ink Empress, your vibrant artistry fascinates my heart's imagination. Sprinklings of alliteration and subtle use of color adds a lovely luster to your creative and beautiful verse. Belated congrats for a wonderful win with this gem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 8/28/2023 11:19:00 PM

Interesting!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/21/2023 10:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. I really enjoyed this one. Have a great day writing away................

Ink Empress
Date: 8/28/2023 11:22:00 PM

Thank you so very much

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/21/2023 2:30:00 AM

Congratulations!! Way to go with this excellent winner. Descriptive and expressive lines. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/20/2023 10:06:00 AM

- Back with congratulations, Ink :) - hugs

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/20/2023 8:28:00 AM

Truly an exceptionally conceptional imagery cast by this gem of a short poem. This really got my attention. As we used to go to the hills to pick plums when a kid. """ dreamscapes from pale plum verses of blurred past"" God bless you.

Ink Empress
Date: 8/28/2023 11:22:00 PM

Thank you so much always

Robert Lindley
Date: 8/20/2023 8:29:00 AM

Sorry, forgot to fav ths. . A fav my good friend.

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/19/2023 5:52:00 PM

Ink Empress, your imagery and and lyrical flow is lovely! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Ink Empress
Date: 8/20/2023 12:50:00 AM

Thank you so much, still new to poetry soup and getting familiar with rules here. And i am just lucky to be placed by you despite not being able to follow rules. Thank you for the recognition, grateful. I had fun writing this

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/16/2023 4:37:00 AM

Wonderful - a light - God bless you, Love, Gina

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/15/2023 11:02:00 AM

- You give color to the dark ... well done :) -

Ink Empress
Date: 8/15/2023 11:29:00 AM

Awn thank you poetic soul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/15/2023 10:20:00 AM

A pretty one.

Ink Empress
Date: 8/15/2023 11:28:00 AM

Thank you so much

Tom Woody

Date: 8/15/2023 10:07:00 AM

Gorgeous and I like how your doing the short poems. I know it's gotta be a challenge for you. Excellent. If you tap the icon next to your avatar I have a message for you

Ink Empress
Date: 8/15/2023 9:28:00 PM

You are so helpful kingy! Thank you very much and surely i would love to be introduced but how would i see that? Sorry still figuring this out.

Tom Woody
Date: 8/15/2023 10:25:00 AM

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Date: 8/15/2023 10:19:00 AM

I'll mention here that the free account gives you basic access. For $39 you can get a premium account and upload photos, audio, video, post blogs and increase word count allowance. Also, if you would like I want to introduce you via a blog. It's a slow burn in this small community when you're new. But if you don't I understand too

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Date: 8/15/2023 10:17:00 AM

Also make sure you have enabled soupmail on your profile

Ink Empress
Date: 8/15/2023 10:16:00 AM

I have no idea how to open the message ?? i feel silly now. Yes ninettes are easy but for some reason the format seems off . The first word is refusing to move to the middle ??

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