Lost Stitches

If you can’t stand the criticism
put down your pen
Instead take up knitting
but caution the thread
Too thick and your stifled
too thin and your bare
As needles purl over
—what hides in despair

(Dreamsleep: October, 2022)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Gauthier Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 11:32 AM
wonderfully rich metaphor ~
Behm Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 3:51 PM
Thanks again.
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