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Lost Sparrow

Beneath dark clouds gathering a sparrow walks, shivering, circling in the mud of winter, his wing a broken splinter. He's unable to fly into spring.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 12/14/2024 10:56:00 AM
I felt sad for the Sparrow. This sort of thing does happen in the wild it is sad when it does...
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Date: 12/13/2024 5:37:00 AM
"The mud of winter ... broken splinter" Wonderful imagery. So much said with so few words.
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Moon Harp
Date: 12/13/2024 10:07:00 AM
Thank you so much, Eric, for commenting on my poem.

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