Lost Souls

what do i do to fill these holes
is it possible to bring back the lost souls
this war has gone to far
it is more destructive then i dying star
ive lost all the people that care
now my heart is just a burning flare
the children only cry
because they have to so many die
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 7:17 PM
Very touchy and moving write, dennis
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May 21, 2011 at 7:05 PM
WAR is terrible and innocent lives lost along with enemy lives dennis.. my youngest son is now in military stationed in Libya luv.. surely your lines have touched my heart and thankxx for your kind words on my newest poem..luv..
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May 21, 2011 at 10:30 PM
i am very sorry to hear about your son. i may only be 15 years old but the war affects my life. i am living in constant fear of loseing my friend who was sent into the war by his father. i havent heard from him in 3 months
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