Lost Soul

i feel like a lost soul drifting thru this life how will i overcome it all the struggle and strife i fight a battle each day deep within my head many times i lose it and inside i feel dead emotions feelings or care are things that i don't feel this makes me ever wonder what is really real.

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Danny Hudson

Date: 2/10/2009 9:11:00 PM

thanks to all who commented on my poems.i speak truly from my heart and do not hold anything back.thanks again.

Michael Jordan

Date: 2/10/2009 5:52:00 PM

danny many years ago now I contemplated Reality - Once I had a friend from Mexico and one from Alaska at my house - What I perceived to be a beautiful day was too hot for one friend and too cold for the other - My point is that reality is what ever we choose it to be for no one sees through our eyes but us - Congrats on being featured - God Bless, MJ

Brandee Augustus

Date: 2/10/2009 3:02:00 PM

Congratulations on getting your poem featured. There is nothing much to say about this poem but the fact that it's a thought provoking and powerful poem!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/10/2009 10:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 2/10/2009 6:39:00 AM

Congrats on "Lost Soul" being featured, Danny. Vince

Amy Swanson

Date: 2/10/2009 4:44:00 AM

Congrats on being featured this week, Danny. This is a very soulful & thought-provoking write. We've all had days like this... I know I have. The only thing that helps me is to just give it over to God...not to sound cliche` but it really does work... because some things are just too big for me & I need Somebody bigger to help me handle it all. He has brought me through an awful lot in my 38 years of life! I probably keep Him pretty busy! haha God bless my friend & hope it gets better. Love, Amy

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 2/8/2009 6:06:00 PM

congradts on the feature. there was a story on NPR about teenagers in Japan who get so desensitized that they are no longer aware of their own feelings other than numbness. I guess the culture favors repression. If you'd forgive me offering a suggestion, when you find yourself wondering what is really real, try focusing on why that question keeps coming up in your head, why it comes up in all our heads. You may find your answer that way.

Date: 2/8/2009 4:26:00 PM

Where there is life there is hope. It's a matter of perspective and faith. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

Stephanie Vn.

Date: 1/27/2009 10:59:00 AM

exactly the same. i feel what it is you mean as though i've said the words myself. Steph