Lost Minds

lost minds and hidden souls
things becoming unreal

where am i at, i can not see
my eyes are very shreal

i have no help no one in sight
my heart is at its flight
blinded by my own self pity
im guided from the light

mislead by shadows and chronic sinners
i feel like im a killer

lord clean my heart and save my soul
so i wont meet the devil
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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April 10, 2009 at 10:02 PM
"Guided from the light." Those are powerful words. We are sometimes guided away from right choices...by peer pressure...at every age. The last line shows your heart. I'll bet God is smiling. And He'll help you. Nice writing. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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