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Lost Minds

lost minds and hidden souls things becoming unreal where am i at, i can not see my eyes are very shreal i have no help no one in sight my heart is at its flight blinded by my own self pity im guided from the light mislead by shadows and chronic sinners i feel like im a killer lord clean my heart and save my soul so i wont meet the devil

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Date: 4/10/2009 10:02:00 PM
"Guided from the light." Those are powerful words. We are sometimes guided away from right choices...by peer pressure...at every age. The last line shows your heart. I'll bet God is smiling. And He'll help you. Nice writing. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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