Lost Mind, Broken Heart, Eyes Bloodshot Red

My head spins out of control, my eyes create a new ocean, my heart pounds so hard it destroys 
homes, my heart screams bloody murder awaiting help that never comes, it lays on the floor 
bleeding out the happiness it once knew, happiness that will never again be found
3/28/10

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 7/10/2010 7:47:00 AM
Pss. "I Love 'Your Pretty Name'" and, I shall return to visit "Your Beautiful Hearts Brushings of Lovely Canvas' From, A Priceless Soul,'" later this day I believe; because, sometimes its where the heart resides that, we wish to be....Smile, "Love to You," John!:) ~
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Date: 7/10/2010 7:40:00 AM
Ps. This is a very stirringly beautiful poem from I believe, a very beautiful and talented young lady ~ I am looking forward to commmenting upon most of them and, hoping, that You shall continue to post anew, a brand new hope and dreams, "Dreams" ~ "My Love to You, 'Precious Chelsea,' Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Rainbows Beautiful Day &, Don't Let It Get Away But, 'Smile,'" Bye Dear!:) ~
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Date: 7/10/2010 7:35:00 AM
Smile ~ "Hello Dear Beautiful Chelsea!":) ~ You know, I do not know why, but, I felt somewhat compelled to read Your words this morning and, I did, read everyone of Your Precious Hearts post and, thought unto myself upon the end of them all that, I just wanted to hold "Your Beauty" within my tender and, kiss it softly amid my love, to You Always, John!:) ~
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