Lost Love

reaching for his hand
as it slips through her fingers
the waves and the sand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Taylor Avatar
June 5, 2012 at 8:53 AM
Awesome, Larry. Nice going. Enjoyed. Ralph
Dietrich Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 7:26 PM
OH my, sounds like Titanic or something. VERY good one for that topic of lost love!!
Andresen Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 3:18 PM
Beautiful haiku Larry. - oxox Anne-Lise
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