Lost Love

the day we met i wasn't in love with you
u loved me i had no clue
v had a friendship tht was very true

one day i came crying to you
the reason very well u knew
that day u promised me u'l never let me feel blue

u held me in ur arms
my face again had that charm
u told me trust me il do u no harm

that same day i fell in love with you
you gave me ur first kiss
this very first feeling i'l everyday miss

few days later u said u had to go
coz thr is some1 other who loves u even more
there was a fake smile which again i wore

i had a question in my heart
when u had no true feelings y did u give it a start???
y did u make me fall for u?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Devnarain Avatar
January 19, 2012 at 6:32 AM
I loved your poem ..Congrats Freny keep up the good work!
Mullan Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 3:19 AM
Congratulations on your win :)
Brown Avatar
January 17, 2012 at 6:57 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Freny. Love, Carol P.S. you can find the featured poets down the center of PoetrySoup Homepage. There are 4 pages of them this week and you can click and read and leave comments to the other poets. The poems are changed around each day giving your poem more exposure. The poems are up from Sunday to the next Sunday
Rahaman Avatar
January 8, 2012 at 4:25 AM
its so damn difficult to get over someone u love. i hope u feel better soon. most of the time pain does bring out the best of writing...execellent work.
Gilbert Avatar
January 8, 2012 at 5:03 AM
thx
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