Lost In Your Thoughts

I escaped the narrow lives of solitude
to taste the wine of your love. 
You showered on me your contagious charm . 
I am enslaved with your thoughts . 
I wish there was ONE place  in the globe 
where lovers could built those beautiful hopes . 
If death knocks me out before the blissful kiss
just walk into the graveyard 
and there you will find your red fiery 
dazzling even in the twilight



I hope you like this one :-)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 12/14/2011 9:34:00 AM
Mesmerising, such a beautifully painted piece, there is ONE place on this globe where that is possible, our hearts! X
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Date: 10/7/2011 10:02:00 AM
yes! amazing work......,lovely Smriti ji.
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Date: 7/10/2011 7:16:00 PM
Smriti this is so deeply emotional an invitation of greatest luv.. intensity influences dramatic.. thankxx for your sweet comments so welcome on my poetry.. appreciate much luv..
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Date: 7/2/2011 8:05:00 PM
I like the idea of a romantic escape in this one. Wishing you the best from New York City. Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/2/2011 1:01:00 PM
I did not get here first....but let death meet you long after billions of blissful kisses.
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Date: 7/2/2011 1:01:00 PM
I did not get here first....but let death meet you long after billions of blissful kisses.
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Date: 7/2/2011 8:15:00 AM
I do like this one...A LOT...MANY TIMES! - Kyle
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