Red Fiery Poet Romanticism

Lost In Your Thoughts

I escaped the narrow lives of solitude
to taste the wine of your love. 
You showered on me your contagious charm . 
I am enslaved with your thoughts . 
I wish there was ONE place  in the globe 
where lovers could built those beautiful hopes . 
If death knocks me out before the blissful kiss
just walk into the graveyard 
and there you will find your red fiery 
dazzling even in the twilight



I hope you like this one :-)

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John-Ovan.P. Hull December 14, 2011 at 9:34 AM Mesmerising, such a beautifully painted piece, there is ONE place on this globe where that is possible, our hearts! X

Amit Valmiki October 7, 2011 at 10:02 AM yes! amazing work......,lovely Smriti ji.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 10, 2011 at 7:16 PM Smriti this is so deeply emotional an invitation of greatest luv.. intensity influences dramatic.. thankxx for your sweet comments so welcome on my poetry.. appreciate much luv..

Matthew Anish July 2, 2011 at 8:05 PM I like the idea of a romantic escape in this one. Wishing you the best from New York City. Yours Matthew Anish

Michael Wayne July 2, 2011 at 1:01 PM I did not get here first....but let death meet you long after billions of blissful kisses.

Michael Wayne July 2, 2011 at 1:01 PM I did not get here first....but let death meet you long after billions of blissful kisses.

Kyle Carlson July 2, 2011 at 8:15 AM I do like this one...A LOT...MANY TIMES! - Kyle