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Lost In the Ripples

Mirrored mountains gleam Ripples erase reflections Water moves away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/20/2014 9:42:00 AM
Love this haiku! I can close my eyes and see the picture you painted so clearly. // paul
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Jayne Eggins
Date: 5/20/2014 10:09:00 AM
Thanks Paul :) I love Haiku but I think its such a gentle art I am loath to write unless I get it right I do experiment I have hundreds of haiku I have never posted....love Jayne x
Date: 4/2/2013 12:28:00 AM
Thank for commenting on one my haiku's. I too enjoyed reading your haiku. Good work.
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