Lost In the Ripples

Mirrored mountains gleam
 Ripples erase reflections
 Water moves away
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Callus Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 9:42 AM
Love this haiku! I can close my eyes and see the picture you painted so clearly. // paul
Eggins Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 10:09 AM
Thanks Paul :) I love Haiku but I think its such a gentle art I am loath to write unless I get it right I do experiment I have hundreds of haiku I have never posted....love Jayne x
Mitchell Jr. Avatar
April 2, 2013 at 12:28 AM
Thank for commenting on one my haiku's. I too enjoyed reading your haiku. Good work.
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