Lost in the Loop

Is your mind no longer serving you? 

Is the method, the plan, not working? 

Endless jobs, endless goals achieved... You have the answers but aren't full. 

Did you know there is and always was a plan that was bigger than our minds could ever comprehend? 

How deeply can you hear without your ears, dear Brother and Sister...? 

How loudly can you hear your gut and the whispers from the wind? 

Strength does not only lie in logic, nor in only empathy/intuition. 

An epidemic of extremely intelligent minds... Lost in the loop. 

Aging and Achieving, also emptying not filling. 

Your mind isn't the one who knows your childhood self is waiting for you. 

Start your life again... Do we continue attempting to control a divine and magical world ? Or flow with it and begin to plan how we actually want life to look... 

Which includes time and space to hear yourself and your bodies whispers... Before it screams. 

We build our later in life plan by not listening now. 

God bless.
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