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lost in the gloaming hiku

lost in the gloaming not one star glimmers . . . the trembling trees

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Date: 4/9/2025 2:38:00 AM
Great sensation in this short poem.
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Date: 4/8/2025 8:38:00 PM
Good one Andrea. Nice tension.
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Date: 4/8/2025 8:54:00 AM
Dear Andrea! Always breathtaking! I can feel the stillness of the gloaming and the quiet tension of those trembling trees. It’s a beautiful picture of nature’s subtle beauty. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 4/8/2025 7:40:00 AM
Hope ya got a flashlight. Ominous haiku Andrea
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