lost in the gloaming hiku

lost in the gloaming
             not one star glimmers . . . 
the trembling trees
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Buhagiar Avatar
April 9, 2025 at 2:38 AM
Great sensation in this short poem.
Mckeithan Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 8:38 PM
Good one Andrea. Nice tension.
Rodgers Avatar
April 8, 2025 at 8:54 AM
Dear Andrea! Always breathtaking! I can feel the stillness of the gloaming and the quiet tension of those trembling trees. It’s a beautiful picture of nature’s subtle beauty. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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