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lost in the evergreen forest

. lost in the conifers the bristlecone pines out her cry goes az Jane uv the jungle to i her lost

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Silent One

Date: 5/2/2024 10:09:00 AM

We have all been here dear James...

James Peranteau
Date: 5/2/2024 3:48:00 PM

shhhh ')

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/2/2024 6:27:00 AM

Hello James, I liked how you convey a sense of isolation and longing amidst the vastness of nature. The imagery of the conifers and bristlecone pines creates a wonderful setting, emphasizing the feeling of being lost and searching for direction. Your artistic poem invites reflection on the complexities of navigation and discovery within both external and internal landscapes. - Blessings, Daniel

James Peranteau
Date: 5/2/2024 8:15:00 AM

nah, i wuz lost in the forest snap'n and she called out my path...cool model, i simply couldn't resit post'n this clearly poetic experience...i love your expound sir ;) ya know; every write uv mine iz intentional, and every explicate by my indulgers intrigues me, and, i always conceptualize their(your)imagine az mine...ty...much love