lost in the evergreen forest

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                        lost in the
                         conifers
                            the 
                   bristlecone pines

                       out her cry
                            goes
                az Jane uv the jungle
                             to i
                          her lost
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May 2, 2024 at 10:09 AM
We have all been here dear James...
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May 2, 2024 at 3:48 PM
shhhh ')
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May 2, 2024 at 6:27 AM
Hello James, I liked how you convey a sense of isolation and longing amidst the vastness of nature. The imagery of the conifers and bristlecone pines creates a wonderful setting, emphasizing the feeling of being lost and searching for direction. Your artistic poem invites reflection on the complexities of navigation and discovery within both external and internal landscapes. - Blessings, Daniel
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May 2, 2024 at 8:15 AM
nah, i wuz lost in the forest snap'n and she called out my path...cool model, i simply couldn't resit post'n this clearly poetic experience...i love your expound sir ;) ya know; every write uv mine iz intentional, and every explicate by my indulgers intrigues me, and, i always conceptualize their(your)imagine az mine...ty...much love
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