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Lost In Pain

I wandered lonely, lost in pain All I could do was weep. A troubled mind, in unknown hills With chasms, dark and deep. I did not know which path to take, Nor which way should I go. I was seeking guidance, A sign, so I would know. A light appeared before me, A figure caught my eye. "Who are you, I asked of him "Or will you pass me by." "Can I help my son, he said. Have you lost you way," "Yes, yes I have I cried" Was all that I could say. "Then come and take my hand, For you must follow me. I am the Lord, your God my son And I shall comfort thee." So the Lord, he took me He became my guide, All my fears then left me, And all my tears they dried. I awoke anew next morning My heart, now filled with hope. Whatever life may bring me, The Lord will help me cope. Entry for Favorite Rhyming Poem Ever - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Laura Loo 27/2/2018. Placed 2nd.

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Date: 3/2/2018 7:44:00 PM
What a beautiful poem, Gary. Congrats on your most deserving win.
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Gary Smith
Date: 3/3/2018 5:52:00 AM
Thank you Line :)
Date: 3/1/2018 6:13:00 PM
A beautiful poem of lovely spiritual expression Gary.. Congratulations on your wonderful win with your excellent write..
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Gary Smith
Date: 3/1/2018 6:18:00 PM
Thank you Susan :)
Date: 2/28/2018 11:12:00 AM
if only more people would lean on the Lord as you have. Beautifully expressed thank you and congratulations on your placement :) -luloo
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Gary Smith
Date: 2/28/2018 11:13:00 AM
Thank you Laura :)
Date: 2/27/2018 11:28:00 AM
A wonderful comforting rhyming poem that flows nicely Gary :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 2/27/2018 11:37:00 AM
Thank you Heidi :)

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