Bl Devnath Poet Senryu

Lost In Own Region

lost in own region
                                            died in unborn calyxes 
                                             flower is not known

                                             no one can pave to
                                       where's no way to go ahead
                                                 ended in itself

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Dorian Petersen Potter March 24, 2015 at 3:57 PM Very nice pen BL! Very sad deep thoughts about life in this one, dear friend. Life can be so harsh at times I know and we all get lost sometimes, that's why I am so happy that I have Jesus to keep me going from him is where I get most of my strength every day. Enjoyed your senryu.A 7 from me! Wishing you a very lovely evening! In his light! God bless you! :) D. Bl Devnath March 25, 2015 at 8:09 AM Many thanks my lovely friend for your nice comment on my sad poem. When i feel blocked my ways i pray to God and He clears my blocked way, i believe too. You are really nice and thanks for your 7 too. Loved always,bl