Liam Mcdaid Poet Couplet

Lost In Loves Space

love the style of your morning kiss 
dancing lips deeply dazzling bliss

Catch you after curtain calls my dreams tonight 
until the sun kisses your eyelids with golden light

Beautiful in one's mind weakness sang a dream
just floated to you dancing upon sunshine beams 

Captivating ball of flames burning bright not the past 
radiating golden warm future holds destiny our torch shines a light everlasting

Holding inside believing crowning beauty silently whispers without sound 
Rising as night's tears leave a dew upon the ground 

Crystal blue clear the happiness within joy brings
inside every wish was your desire softly feathers touching wings embracing sing

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Richard Lamoureux February 7, 2015 at 8:57 AM I'm a sucker for romance, and this is right up my alley! Great Job Liam.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 5, 2015 at 8:12 PM I'm lost in the dreamy romance of this write, Liam! Simply beautiful lines you have penned...God bless you and the dear lady who has stolen your heart! Hugs, Rhonda Liam Mcdaid February 7, 2015 at 4:50 AM alone the heart sings to a dream thank you rhonda for the wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you

Gary Bateman February 4, 2015 at 6:36 PM Liam My Mate!! A spot-on fabulous and brilliant "Rhymed Couplet" write here. The Leprechauns are dancing a jig on this one!! Best to Ya' Mate!! Gary Liam Mcdaid February 7, 2015 at 4:37 AM smiling gary the leprechauns are dancing under the rainbow wonderful comment pal heartfelt appreciated

Anne-Lise Andresen February 4, 2015 at 11:21 AM - A soft meeting with beautiful words, dear Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Liam Mcdaid February 7, 2015 at 4:35 AM thank you dear friend for the heartfelt beautiful comment anne lise wishing you a great weekend

Wilma Neels February 4, 2015 at 4:57 AM This gem is so aptly titled Liam. Absolutely enjoyed it :) Liam Mcdaid February 7, 2015 at 4:22 AM wilma thank you for the dazzling comment deeply appreciated bless you

Dorian Petersen Potter February 2, 2015 at 4:59 PM Hi Liam ! Another very beautiful and dazzling love poem penned by you my dearest friend.Just awesome! A gigantic 7 +++ from me! A very romantic and passionate love poem to be held so very close to ones heart. smiling. I enjoy it! Truly mighty golden pen! So sweet and beautiful! To me you're the best!God bless you and keep you in His Light and protection always!Have a very lovely evening :) Love n' hugs! xoxox D.^O^ Liam Mcdaid February 7, 2015 at 4:21 AM thank you so kindly dorian for the wonderful comment dear pal bless you deeply appreciated

Tim Smith February 2, 2015 at 4:15 PM Amazing Liam...happy for you...Tim Liam Mcdaid February 7, 2015 at 4:12 AM i wrote this last year tim smiling thank you pal for the wonderful comment bless you

Charmaine Chircop February 2, 2015 at 3:13 PM Sweet and beautiful Liam!! Liam Mcdaid February 5, 2015 at 11:45 AM thank you charmaine your a pal deeply appreciated beautiful comment bless you