Lost In An Old Diner...

sad wallpaper and cigarette buts
a man smoking over a coffee cup
with an old stare at a new face 
where all society loses their place  

the photos hang crooked on the wall
with the waitress answering a telephone call
a seat for two waiting to be filled
and rain bouncing off the window sill 

a haze rising from the man’s lips
while the other one looks away and sips
familiar people in a strange setting
with a few remembering but most forgetting 

about the lives they lead each day
with a lot to do and little to say
I drink my coke and eat my food
but who am I to capture this mood 

I want to hold onto the images I see
like the winking eye and crooked teeth
but I can only write it all down
as I saunter from town to town
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Richards Avatar
February 25, 2009 at 3:57 PM
I feel as if I just wandered in off the sidewalk to grab a bite and take a look around.Well done! ~ Carrie
Parish Avatar
February 25, 2009 at 12:20 PM
love the flow of this write. I myself often do this...I think they call it 'people watching'...be surprise what you can capture in your mind when you're just looking around. A very good write my friend. ~Belinda~
Ginn Avatar
February 25, 2009 at 11:32 AM
Cool name to your poem Luke, all of your images translated wonderfully. Great job. Laurie
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