Lost In a Dream

Sitting around with blood shot eyes
I've grown tough over the years, but still I cry
Lost in a dream, stuck in reality
Her and gone just another casualty

Laying around with all these thoughts in my head,
Practicing on dreaming of thoughts I've read.
Breathing in water, fun filled disaster
Collapse my lungs and wish I'd die faster.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Williams Avatar
August 19, 2012 at 4:13 PM
Joshua hang on in there..you write very well...David
Rawls Avatar
November 3, 2012 at 12:22 PM
thanks David.
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