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Lost In a Dream

Sitting around with blood shot eyes I've grown tough over the years, but still I cry Lost in a dream, stuck in reality Her and gone just another casualty Laying around with all these thoughts in my head, Practicing on dreaming of thoughts I've read. Breathing in water, fun filled disaster Collapse my lungs and wish I'd die faster.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/19/2012 4:13:00 PM
Joshua hang on in there..you write very well...David
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Joshua Rawls
Date: 11/3/2012 12:22:00 PM
thanks David.

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