Lost In a Dream

A sudden leap of faith took away my pride,
And a blurry image of life made me shied,
A concern deep in me reside,
To which questions of mine has all been defied. 

I am lost in a not so tranquil world of no end,
As I make another turn, my eyes see no road to bend
Shall I let another leap of faith take its course of extend?
Or shall I take a known step make its amend?

And a battle I've never known now brought me news,
To where ever side I turn, there are corners of blues,
My visions as of now, has gone subtly confuse
Nothing to read, nothing to see, left with no clues. 

I took a moment to silence my voiceless fear
Hoping my windows and doors would once be clear
I hold no second to spare and not let another appear
But to my amuse, I woke up from a dream with a shedding tear.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kearley Avatar
April 5, 2012 at 5:43 PM
I have been reading your poems,and you remind me of myself in a way?Words from the heart is all that I have read. :o) They bring me a smile for the beauty,but sadness with the story.Very nice :o)
Eastman Avatar
March 24, 2012 at 11:54 AM
Your world sadly has a lot of fears and problems creating great fears... You write beautifully... I wish you continued hope and a great life... Your poetry is very deep and very well written. You should put it together in a book...
Jabri Avatar
March 24, 2012 at 4:17 PM
I dont know about being deep...thank you very much for appreciating my works...you inspire me to write more :) .. God bless Carol.
Dietrich Avatar
March 14, 2012 at 8:55 PM
Your poem goes along really well with its title. From what I've seen of your poetry, You are a deep thinker!!
A   Avatar
March 14, 2012 at 12:35 PM
Sarah, this id deep....losing all means to tranquil..glad it was only.a dream...pd
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