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Lost In a Dream

A sudden leap of faith took away my pride, And a blurry image of life made me shied, A concern deep in me reside, To which questions of mine has all been defied. I am lost in a not so tranquil world of no end, As I make another turn, my eyes see no road to bend Shall I let another leap of faith take its course of extend? Or shall I take a known step make its amend? And a battle I've never known now brought me news, To where ever side I turn, there are corners of blues, My visions as of now, has gone subtly confuse Nothing to read, nothing to see, left with no clues. I took a moment to silence my voiceless fear Hoping my windows and doors would once be clear I hold no second to spare and not let another appear But to my amuse, I woke up from a dream with a shedding tear.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/5/2012 5:43:00 PM
I have been reading your poems,and you remind me of myself in a way?Words from the heart is all that I have read. :o) They bring me a smile for the beauty,but sadness with the story.Very nice :o)
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Date: 3/24/2012 11:54:00 AM
Your world sadly has a lot of fears and problems creating great fears... You write beautifully... I wish you continued hope and a great life... Your poetry is very deep and very well written. You should put it together in a book...
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Sarah Jabri
Date: 3/24/2012 4:17:00 PM
I dont know about being deep...thank you very much for appreciating my works...you inspire me to write more :) .. God bless Carol.
Date: 3/14/2012 8:55:00 PM
Your poem goes along really well with its title. From what I've seen of your poetry, You are a deep thinker!!
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Date: 3/14/2012 12:35:00 PM
Sarah, this id deep....losing all means to tranquil..glad it was only.a dream...pd
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