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Young and not knowing life Unable to hold a knife That's what is like To not feel life's strike My shoes size changed New things feel strange Some friends stayed the same Others played the game Your suppose to go home to careness Instead you fight over fairness There's nowhere to turn The impossible feels like heart burn I'm lost in this world Wondering in my bed curled What difference will be the next day I'll wait to see and then I'll say

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/18/2010 9:44:00 AM
Christy, Congratulations on your honorable mention. Sincere, Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/3/2010 3:26:00 AM
Congratulations Christy, on your Honorable Mention in Mac McGovern’s “Anything Goes” Mini-Poetry contest with these heartfelt words. You are a winner! Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/2/2010 1:21:00 PM
Congratulations on placing in the contest, Christy! You aptly portrayed a young peson feeling lost . LUv,Andrea
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Date: 2/2/2010 4:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Christy. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/1/2010 8:13:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on being one of the winners in the Anything Goes contest. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 2/1/2010 4:59:00 PM
Congrats Christy on your winning poem in Mac's Anything Goes contest... wonderful write and a well deserved win.. luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 2/1/2010 9:39:00 AM
I am so happy to have been able to read your poetry today Christy. I haven't been able to read much poetry for a few days now. Love, Carol
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