Lost Heart

why did you push me away 

you promised my you would stay

the clouds are so forever gray 

oh for where is that beautiful day my heart lost for my hand are broken

my mind thinks no more 

for the lady of the kaftan look i will write something in my book

so please help my hands of love heal

please take away my heart of stone 

for i don't want to be alone                                                     

                                                                                      the
nightwalker
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 5, 2010 at 2:15 PM
Pray, why did thee push me away, 'Twas thee who promised me that thy would stay, And yet the clouds are now forever gray..that would be how you MIGHT change this verse to dialect. Anyway it would be great to have as many entries from the UK as possible! Light & Love
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October 5, 2010 at 2:12 PM
dear poet..I am having a contest which focuses on the UK & Ireland, I would love it if you entered. The verse must be written as someone would speak in DIALECT and be of something which might have or did happen in the past in these places. The contest is called Bloody Sista's, please enter.
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