Lost Girl Secret

Can you keep a secret
and promise not to tell?
We haven't been friends for long,
therefore I don't know you well.
Divulging this to the wrong party
would be as if to yell.
So take it to the next world
whether it's heaven or hell.
Many former dolls broken
sadly and unfortunately fell.
So withholding this secret in heartless
times would be awfully swell.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 4/4/2014 9:07:00 AM
Secrets. Well said. Need I say more?
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Date: 4/4/2014 9:06:00 AM
Secrets. Well said. Need I say more?
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Date: 3/31/2014 7:28:00 AM
Brilliantly penned poem. Congrats on your poem being featured this week, debra
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Date: 7/7/2013 11:32:00 AM
Congratulations, with your winning poem .... xox~ PD
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Date: 7/1/2013 12:29:00 PM
Congrats on your win. well done. AO
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Date: 6/30/2013 3:34:00 PM
Debra, great creativity and originality...keeping any kind of secrets can be so difficult... great poem :)
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Date: 6/29/2013 3:39:00 PM
Debra, :-) Congratulations in my awesome SECRET contest. don't know if the secret is totally out. I'm loving all the winners & poems that spoke to me in their own way. enjoy my blog if you like, peace and love. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~
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Date: 6/25/2013 8:31:00 AM
A true testament to giving benefit of the doubt. Nicely done!
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Date: 6/24/2013 3:28:00 PM
Debra, you have a very interesting perspective. It is indeed a challenging world for all out young people. Also, I think there are many variations on being lost so you have a universal theme. I am impressed.
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