Debra Mundine Poet Rhyme

Lost Girl Secret

Can you keep a secret
and promise not to tell?
We haven't been friends for long,
therefore I don't know you well.
Divulging this to the wrong party
would be as if to yell.
So take it to the next world
whether it's heaven or hell.
Many former dolls broken
sadly and unfortunately fell.
So withholding this secret in heartless
times would be awfully swell.

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John Pen April 4, 2014 at 9:07 AM Secrets. Well said. Need I say more?

John Pen April 4, 2014 at 9:06 AM Secrets. Well said. Need I say more?

Dr.Ram Mehta March 31, 2014 at 7:28 AM Brilliantly penned poem. Congrats on your poem being featured this week, debra

Poet Destroyer A July 7, 2013 at 11:32 AM Congratulations, with your winning poem .... xox~ PD

Abdulhafeez Oyewole July 1, 2013 at 12:29 PM Congrats on your win. well done. AO

Karen Anglesey June 30, 2013 at 3:34 PM Debra, great creativity and originality...keeping any kind of secrets can be so difficult... great poem :)

Skat A June 29, 2013 at 3:39 PM Debra, :-) Congratulations in my awesome SECRET contest. don't know if the secret is totally out. I'm loving all the winners & poems that spoke to me in their own way. enjoy my blog if you like, peace and love. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~

Poet Tacito June 25, 2013 at 8:31 AM A true testament to giving benefit of the doubt. Nicely done!

Duke Beaufort June 24, 2013 at 3:28 PM Debra, you have a very interesting perspective. It is indeed a challenging world for all out young people. Also, I think there are many variations on being lost so you have a universal theme. I am impressed.