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Lost Girl Secret

Can you keep a secret and promise not to tell? We haven't been friends for long, therefore I don't know you well. Divulging this to the wrong party would be as if to yell. So take it to the next world whether it's heaven or hell. Many former dolls broken sadly and unfortunately fell. So withholding this secret in heartless times would be awfully swell.

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John Pen

Date: 4/4/2014 9:07:00 AM

Secrets. Well said. Need I say more?

John Pen

Date: 4/4/2014 9:06:00 AM

Secrets. Well said. Need I say more?

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/31/2014 7:28:00 AM

Brilliantly penned poem. Congrats on your poem being featured this week, debra

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/7/2013 11:32:00 AM

Congratulations, with your winning poem .... xox~ PD

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 7/1/2013 12:29:00 PM

Congrats on your win. well done. AO

Karen Anglesey

Date: 6/30/2013 3:34:00 PM

Debra, great creativity and originality...keeping any kind of secrets can be so difficult... great poem :)

Skat A

Date: 6/29/2013 3:39:00 PM

Debra, :-) Congratulations in my awesome SECRET contest. don't know if the secret is totally out. I'm loving all the winners & poems that spoke to me in their own way. enjoy my blog if you like, peace and love. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~

Poet Tacito

Date: 6/25/2013 8:31:00 AM

A true testament to giving benefit of the doubt. Nicely done!

Duke Beaufort

Date: 6/24/2013 3:28:00 PM

Debra, you have a very interesting perspective. It is indeed a challenging world for all out young people. Also, I think there are many variations on being lost so you have a universal theme. I am impressed.