Lost Gift

LOST GIFT You gave me the gift of writing I never knew I had. I wrote so many lines about the good times and the bad. But ever since you let me go and I finally gave up trying. The gift you gave to me is now gone fore I’m no longer writing. Writing was my way of expressing how I felt. I used to love to write to you the words that made you melt. I miss those days of sharing my heart so true. I don’t think there will ever come a day when I won’t wish to write of you. By Arthur James

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Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 3/14/2016 4:04:00 PM

Well penned Arthur, nice rhyme and flow. Welcome to PS, trust you'll enjoy it!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/3/2016 1:46:00 PM

Arthur, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@