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Lost Forever

A Taste of Honey. A Tender Loving Kiss.
Such simple and great pleasures in life do truly exist.
Don't allow yourself any lost opportunities.
Precious moments pass us by so fleetingly.
This is your one and only opportunity to enjoy your life.
It will all be lost forever after you die.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

June 25, 2010 at 5:21 AM

I am enjoying reading the diverse poetry presented here today. I wish you a weekend of good health, love, and inspiration. The best to you always in your endeavors Billy. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

June 24, 2010 at 7:07 AM

wow! Billy this is like the most sweetest poem I have ever read of yours ,,enjoyed,..p.d..

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 24, 2010 at 5:42 AM

Yes, Billy we have to one life and enjoy good pleasures whatever comes to you. Nice thought

Nick Bagnall

June 24, 2010 at 4:50 AM

Unless I'm missing something, it doesn't rhyme, that in itself is not a great problem, just change the form to free verse. I think you could do a really nice poem if you switched things around and got a good meter in there. There are alot of good ideas / words / sentiments in there, just need polishing up a bit.