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Lost First Poem

"untitled" my first poem - words unremembered - was for a boy I'll never forget Oct. 3, 2020 for JCB Burl's How My First Poem Was Born Poetry Contest

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Jcb Brul

Date: 10/11/2020 12:02:00 AM

my first poem - words unremembered - was for a boy I'll never forget Ohhhh so sweet! Congratulations and thank you for sharing this sweet moment of your life as a poet. I cannot contain my joy in knowing how your 1st poem came to exist.

Ann Gilmour

Date: 10/9/2020 1:46:00 AM

Beautiful sentiment ~ many congrats Andrea, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Marilene Evans

Date: 10/8/2020 7:31:00 PM

Extremely good poem. Congratulations.

Howard Kerr

Date: 10/8/2020 6:34:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea, for contacting me about my contest entry and your compliment. Congratulations on your contest win with an original and evocative Monoku. Howard

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 10/8/2020 6:03:00 PM

Congratulations, Andrea. Lovely!

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/8/2020 9:42:00 AM

Brilliant, Andrea. Love this ~

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/8/2020 9:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. One never forgets their first love. Enjoy your win and day...............

Brian Strand

Date: 10/8/2020 8:06:00 AM

Andrea inspiration always leads our way

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 10/8/2020 6:05:00 AM

One never forgets their first crush... Congratulations Andrea, a well deserved win, Belle

Carol Mitra

Date: 10/8/2020 5:38:00 AM

Congrats Andrea on your win....Hugs :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/8/2020 5:23:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 10/8/2020 4:15:00 AM

Congratulations, Andrea, on your Top Win in this contest!!

John Watt

Date: 10/6/2020 5:25:00 PM

Clever turn of a phrase. Like my first poem, it was never heard by the intended recipient. GL in the C ~ John

Jack Horne

Date: 10/6/2020 12:25:00 PM

a clever write here, my friend

David Meade

Date: 10/4/2020 11:35:00 AM

How interesting!! Who was this boy that left his mark upon a little girl's heart!! Write on . . .

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/4/2020 1:38:00 PM

I was 17 at a church youth conference, and I met a handsome tall guy. I did not know he was only 14 at that time. Then I found out and it was going around that I was a cradle robber. WEll, if I were single again today, for SURE I would become a cradle robber again. haha

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/4/2020 1:38:00 PM

haha, that did not come out sounding very good. What I meant is I would want a guy NOT older than me! I actually think I recall his name as Steve Bond. I only was with him a few days walking around. He wrote me in college and then I heard he was asking my sisters for dances back at the regional dances!!