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Lost First Poem

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my first poem - words unremembered - was for a boy I'll never forget

Oct. 3, 2020 for JCB Burl's How My First Poem Was Born Poetry Contest

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JC Brul

October 11, 2020 at 12:02 AM

my first poem - words unremembered - was for a boy I'll never forget Ohhhh so sweet! Congratulations and thank you for sharing this sweet moment of your life as a poet. I cannot contain my joy in knowing how your 1st poem came to exist.

Ann Gilmour

October 9, 2020 at 1:46 AM

Beautiful sentiment ~ many congrats Andrea, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Marilene Evans

October 8, 2020 at 7:31 PM

Extremely good poem. Congratulations.

Howard Kerr

October 8, 2020 at 6:34 PM

Thank you, Andrea, for contacting me about my contest entry and your compliment. Congratulations on your contest win with an original and evocative Monoku. Howard

Malabika Ray Choudhury

October 8, 2020 at 6:03 PM

Congratulations, Andrea. Lovely!

Line Gauthier

October 8, 2020 at 9:42 AM

Brilliant, Andrea. Love this ~

Paula Goldsmith

October 8, 2020 at 9:28 AM

Congratulations on your win. One never forgets their first love. Enjoy your win and day...............

Brian Strand

October 8, 2020 at 8:06 AM

Andrea inspiration always leads our way

Beryl Edmonds

October 8, 2020 at 6:05 AM

One never forgets their first crush... Congratulations Andrea, a well deserved win, Belle

Carol Mitra

October 8, 2020 at 5:38 AM

Congrats Andrea on your win....Hugs :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 8, 2020 at 5:23 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Newton Ranaweera

October 8, 2020 at 4:15 AM

Congratulations, Andrea, on your Top Win in this contest!!

John Watt

October 6, 2020 at 5:25 PM

Clever turn of a phrase. Like my first poem, it was never heard by the intended recipient. GL in the C ~ John

Jack Horne

October 6, 2020 at 12:25 PM

a clever write here, my friend

David Meade

October 4, 2020 at 11:35 AM

How interesting!! Who was this boy that left his mark upon a little girl's heart!! Write on . . .

Andrea Dietrich

October 4, 2020 at 1:38 PM

I was 17 at a church youth conference, and I met a handsome tall guy. I did not know he was only 14 at that time. Then I found out and it was going around that I was a cradle robber. WEll, if I were single again today, for SURE I would become a cradle robber again. haha

Andrea Dietrich

October 4, 2020 at 1:38 PM

haha, that did not come out sounding very good. What I meant is I would want a guy NOT older than me! I actually think I recall his name as Steve Bond. I only was with him a few days walking around. He wrote me in college and then I heard he was asking my sisters for dances back at the regional dances!!